30 November, 2017

YOU ARE ABOUT TO BE ACQUAINTED WITH THE CIVILIZATION KNOWN AS.. *drumroll please* INDUS VALLEY!

.INDUS VALLEY.
My favorite civilization to learn about was… INDUS VALLEY!
They were relatively peaceful, compared to the other ‘bloody’ and ‘conquering’ armed civilizations. They were very sophisticated and advanced, with cleanliness all around and a slice-of-life style of living in something resembling a city. I think I would’ve fit in just fine because I like peace and hate warfare. It’s all the world wants these days, warfare. The Indus people lived their own, safe, quiet lives while the world around them was going
A single tool I would have given them is a book of knowledge. They could’ve shaped the world by themselves, without warfare, and created a better place if only they had more knowledge about the world, like sickness and disease, and food shortage. They could’ve even ended world hunger before it even started, just reading that book!

OKAY MAYBE I'M GETTING A LITTLE AHEAD OF MYSELF…


Well, that concludes my blog post! Thank y’all! :)
~ Grace Jin ~

3 comments:

  1. Wow grace you can really express yourself with writing!

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  2. Nice Grace, I really like all the adjectives you used and your title. And even though my favorite civilization was Babylonia I would like to live in the Indus Valley to, because it is peaceful. I also really liked that you used different size words to show the more important things.

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